Monday, September 28, 2009

Beast from the air chapter 6 "What is the beast?" Jack

Dear Diary,

It is another day on this glorious island. Everything is great but piggy whom I can’t stand we always seem to get embroiled with each other. Any way I remember Ralph saying that he wanted a message from someone a grown up or something. I guess that would mean that there would be a message in the sky or a guy. That’s it a guy fell from the sky and landed near the fire or mountain top. Mutinously I didn’t believe this because that is ludicrous I thought that was silly. I guess the boys aren’t aware of it because they aren’t that watchful for stuff like that they just listen to us and follow us of course I like that being leader is fun. Sam n Eric of course exaggerated a lot but of course it was with leviathan. They were just scared and didn’t want to admit it so they made up a huge story with claws and teeth and being able to run fast, this made me waxy because I knew it wasn’t true but being a hunter you have to show respect. The boys weren’t much help they were scared until we got there then they decided to push rocks down cliffs. After all of that I love it here I could care less if we are rescued or not I love the leadership and no grownups to tell us what to do.

1 comment:

  1. good job at using the vocab. ypu might want to capitilize the names of the kids becasue some are lowercase and you might want to make a little longer. nut besiades that its all good.

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